After studying concepts of common errors in sentences, I know I do mistakes in all of them, but my major problem is doing stringy sentences. Well, now that the problem is defined, I hope my writing will improve.
Last Saturday night, going to my niece's birthday party, I passed by a street with big Halloween decorations. Almost each house is in the mood, and there are a lot of houses with brilliant designs. If you want to see it, you will have to go to at the intersection of Clifton and Summit Ave in Hackensach. There are 2 blocks of terror.
Also, remember! this first Sunday of November, you have to delay your watch for 1 hour, so you will have an extra hour.
About Me
- Frida
- I love pets being my favorite dogs. In my native country, I had big dogs. Here, I only have a beutiful female cat named Tinkerbell.
1 comment:
Hi, Frida. Glad you've taken a close look at the types of mistakes students tend to make (via the last homework assignment).
That's interesting that you've identified "stringy sentences" as one of your writing issues. I'll have to take a look at that the next time I read one of your essays.
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It's something, isn't it, how some people decorate their lawns for Halloween? I've seen some amazing ones over the years, including one in Morristown that looked like a movie set. Great stuff!
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