After studying concepts of common errors in sentences, I know I do mistakes in all of them, but my major problem is doing stringy sentences. Well, now that the problem is defined, I hope my writing will improve.
Last Saturday night, going to my niece's birthday party, I passed by a street with big Halloween decorations. Almost each house is in the mood, and there are a lot of houses with brilliant designs. If you want to see it, you will have to go to at the intersection of Clifton and Summit Ave in Hackensach. There are 2 blocks of terror.
Also, remember! this first Sunday of November, you have to delay your watch for 1 hour, so you will have an extra hour.

Hi everybody, we are three weeks ahead from the election day. I will not vote but I am interested in the political situation. I am Democrat yet I respect any good idea. Well, writing these two sentences took me a few minutes for that reason, I felt sometimes awkward. The good news is any goal with practice is reachable. The good advice that a wise person said to me one day was "there is no past for complains, only future to get your dreams."
Speaking of our writting class, specially using blogger.com, I will say it help us a lot since it is easy for us to write comments in a sport style without pressure and also read other comments of our classmates.

Well, today has been a busy day. In the morning, I played voleyball with my siblings and cousins. The teams were divided between men and women. Unfortunately, my team lost 1 againt 3 sets. Now, I am waiting for the next Sunday to have a rematch game. Later I did the lawn and watered my small garden. At the end, I read the posted articles about the cons and pros of using credit cards for teenagers. In conclusion, it was an interesting and sunny day.